科罗拉多矿业学院(Colorado School of Mines)留学文书写作指南(2018版)

文书题目

本校留学文书中出现了学习计划类文书,请仔细了解学校和所申请项目的相关情况。

写文书 Florence Caldwell was the first woman to graduate from Mines. She enrolled in 1895 and found that her fellow classmates discouraged her attendance. She persevered through that discouragement and graduated with a degree in Civil Engineering in 1898. She was described as a problem-solver, who was loyal, kind, and sympathetic to others and displayed unwavering courage. Describe a time when you overcame an obstacle, persevered through a situation, or displayed characteristics similar to Florence Caldwell.

翻译:Florence Caldwell是矿业学院的第一位女毕业生。她于1895年入学,但发现同学们并不欢迎她在校学习。她在不友善的环境中坚持了下来,并于1898年以土木工程学位毕业。人们称她为一位忠诚、友善、富有对他人的同情心并展现出不屈勇气的问题解决者。描述你克服困难、坚持度过逆境或表现了与Florence Caldwell类似特质的一刻。

解析:AADPS分类IV-b

字数限制:可选,7001字符

写文书 If you like, please tell us why Mines is the best fit for you or tell us something about yourself that you feel the rest of your application does not communicate, such as "What's your favorite high school class and why?", "You visited Mines and see yourself here because…," "What are you most passionate about (choose one)? Leadership? Teamwork? Innovation? Community? Something else?"

翻译:如果你希望的话,请告诉我们科罗拉多矿业学院为何是与你最匹配的,或者谈谈在申请的其他地方没有充分表达的自身情况,如“你最喜欢的高中课程是什么?为什么?”“你访问了科罗拉多矿业学院,觉得自己属于这里,因为……”“你在哪方面(选择一个)最有激情?领导力?团队协作?创新?社区?其他?”

解析:AADPS分类I-c/建议参考留学象限AADPS留学文书分类等理论,选择一个优质素材

字数限制:可选,7001字符

重要通知

本文为AADPS原创,最新修订于2018年8月26日,发布于https://aadps.net/2018/12952.html

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陈 欣

陈 欣

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