2014年

Who is the person you dream of becoming and how do you believe Syracuse University can help you achieve this?
翻译：你梦想成为谁？你认为雪城大学能如何帮助你实现该梦想？
解析：AADPS分类I-c
字数限制：300词

I dream of becoming a person like my father. My father once taught Computer Engineering in college, but later he determined that there was more he can do if he put his knowledge into action. It was a time when the information industry was booming and he felt like the right thing to do was to use his talent in the market. He then started his own business he has now. My father is one of the most hardworking people I have seen, but what's really impressive about him are his ideas and creativity. He is never afraid to innovate and he would not let go of any opportunity. Most of the time I would be amazed by the way he solved a problem. The most important thing, he said, is not to give up. He is brilliant at dealing with relationships and forging close bonds with his colleagues and subordinates. He is the type of person who always finds the most effective way to finish tasks at hand, and he would not be stopped by anything.

Thus, I appreciate the idea of “Scholarship in Action” and how “excellence is tested in the marketplace”. I believe my father's skills in his line of business could only be gained by field experience, which requires someone to go beyond the books. The knowledge is important, but what's even more critical is to apply it in the field and gather the necessary information and resources. Syracuse gives me the opportunity to practice my learning. In the real world, I can put my mettle to trial and see what I can accomplish. It is how I am going to pick up the art of communication and work.

留学文书译文（机翻）：

我梦想成为一个像我父亲一样的人。我父亲曾经在大学里教计算机工程，但后来他决定，如果他把自己的知识付诸实践，他还能做更多的事情。那是一个信息产业蓬勃发展的时期，他觉得正确的做法是在市场上发挥他的才能。然后，他开始了自己的事业。我父亲是我见过的最勤奋的人之一，但他给人留下深刻印象的是他的思想和创造力。他从不害怕创新，他不会放过任何机会。大多数时候，我都会对他解决问题的方式感到惊讶。他说，最重要的是不要放弃。他善于处理人际关系，与同事和下属建立密切关系。他是那种总能找到最有效的方法来完成手头任务的人，他不会被任何事情阻止。

因此，我很欣赏“实践中的学术”以及“在市场上检验卓越”的理念。我相信我父亲在这一行的技能只能通过实地经验获得，这需要有人超越书本。这些知识很重要，但更关键的是将其应用于现场，并收集必要的信息和资源。雪城给了我练习学习的机会。在现实世界中，我可以考验我的勇气，看看我能完成什么。这就是我如何学会沟通和工作的艺术。

标化条件：GPA 3.2 TOEFL 93 ACT 28

AADPS老师文书点评：在留学文书中描绘自己的榜样时，一般要在专业技能等“硬实力”和领导力等“软实力”间达到一个动态平衡，切忌顾此失彼。

家长感言：整个服务过程十分顺畅，和老师沟通也好。五星好评！