北卡罗来纳大学教堂山分校(University of North Carolina, Chapel Hill)留学文书写作指南(2018版)

文书题目

本校采用Common Application作为官方认可的网申系统,可能还至少需要完成一篇标准的Common Essay
本校留学文书中出现了学习计划类文书,请仔细了解学校和所申请项目的相关情况。

写文书 We hope you'll share with us the activities that you've found especially worthwhile. We also hope you won't feel compelled to tell us everything you've ever done or, worse yet, to do things that mean little to you just because you think we want you to do them. We also hope you'll remember—because we never forget—that low-profile pursuits can be just as meaningful as ones that draw more attention, and that fewer activities can be just as good as more, and sometimes even better. Although starting a new club, for example, can be a great experience and helpful to others, so can caring for siblings, parents, or grandparents, or working outside the home to put food on the table, or being a good and caring friend. We hope you won't feel as though you have to do the former, especially if your doing so will keep you from doing the latter. For all these reasons, although we're glad to receive complete résumés, we don't require or encourage them. Instead, if you choose to submit something that goes beyond what you're providing through your Common Application, we encourage you to keep it brief; focus less on including everything than on choosing and explaining the things that have meant the most to you; and upload it here.

翻译:我们希望你可以与我们分享你觉得特别有价值的活动。我们也希望你不用巨细无遗的告诉我们你做过的每件事,或者在更糟的情况下,去做那些你认为我们希望看到但却对你自己无甚意义的事。我们还希望你可以记住——因为我们没忘记——低调的追求可能和高举高打一样有意义,而且贪多不如求精。虽然创建社团是不错的经历并能帮到其他人,但照顾自己的兄弟姐妹、父母或祖父母,又或在外打工以维持家计,又或当一名关心人的好朋友也同样不错。我们希望你不用觉得一定要去做第一种类型的活动,尤其是从事这种活动会让你无法经历后面这些类型的话。基于这些原因,虽然我们很高兴收到完整的简历,但事实上这方面我们既不要求也不鼓励。反过来,如果你要提交通用申请上没涉及的东西,我们鼓励你简明扼要的说明——不记流水账而是选择性的阐明对你最重要的事情——并在此上传。

解析:AADPS分类I-b

字数限制:可选

  • 写文书 Tell us about a peer who has made a difference in your life.
  • 写文书 What do you hope will change about the place where you live?
  • 写文书 What is one thing that we don't know about you that you want us to know?
  • 写文书 What about your background, or what perspective, belief, or experience, will help you contribute to the education of your classmates at UNC?

翻译:

  • 和我们说说一个改变你生活的同龄人。
  • 你希望如何改变你居住的地方?
  • 有一样我们不清楚,但你想让我们知道的关于你自己的情况。这会是什么?
  • 你的哪个背景、观点、信仰或经验可以为你在北卡教堂山的未来同学的教育体验做出贡献?

解析:

字数限制:四选二,200-250词

题目归档

2016-2017 [+]

  • Tell us a story that helps us better understand a person, place, or thing you find inspiring.
  • Tell us about a small goal you hope to achieve, whether in the next 10 days, 10 months, or 10 years.
  • What will be the best breakthrough - whether scientific, social, economic, or other - between now and 2025?

翻译:

  • 用一个故事帮助我们更好的理解某个启迪你的人物、地点或事件。
  • 告诉我们你希望达成的一个小目标,不论是在未来十天、十个月还是十年。
  • 在现在和2025年间,科学、社会、经济或者其他某个领域里最好的突破会是什么?

解析:

字数限制:四选二,200-250词

2015-2016 [+]

Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences.

翻译:请简述你的一个课外活动或工作经历。

解析:AADPS分类I-b

字数限制:250词

  • Teen activist and 2014 Nobel Peace prize winner Malala Yousafzai said, “I raise up my voice-not so that I can shout, but so that those without a voice can be heard”. For whom have you raised your voice?
  • Students learn both inside and outside the classroom. What would other members of the Carolina community learn from you?
  • You get one do-over of any moment in your life. What would you do over, and why?
  • You’ve been invited to give a TEDtalk… what is yours about?
  • There are 27 amendments to the Constitution of the US. What should be the 28th?

翻译:

  • 青少年活动家、2014年诺贝尔和平奖得主马拉拉说:“我提高我的声音——不是因此我可以喊,而是这样可以让不能发出声音的人被听到。”你为谁提高了你的声音?
  • 学生在课堂内外都能学到东西。卡罗来纳社区的其他成员会从你那学到什么?
  • 你有一个在你生命任何时段重来一次的机会。你会重做什么?为什么?
  • 你被邀请做一个Ted演讲,你的演讲会是关于什么?
  • 现有27个美国宪法修正案。第28个应该是什么?

解析:

字数限制:五选一,400-500词

Complete each of the following sentences about yourself. Don’t think too long or too hard; just help us get to know you better.

  • Biggest little worry:
  • Note to my future self:
  • Fun fact:
  • Most fun I ever had:
  • Question I would most like answered:

翻译:完成以下有关你自己的句子。不要想得太久或太复杂,帮助我们更好了解你吧。

  • 最大的小担忧:
  • 给未来自己的留言:
  • 有趣的事实:
  • 我玩得最爽的一次:
  • 我最想要回答的问题:

字数限制:每题1-10词

2014-2015 [+]

  • Why do you do what you do?
  • You were just invited to speak at the White House. Write your speech.
  • What one thing should all students know before their high school graduation?
  • What concerns you about your world? What do you hope to do to make it better?
  • UNC Professor Barbara Fredrickson---an expert in positive emotions---has defined love as “micro-moments of connection between people, even strangers.” Tell us about a time when you experienced a “micro-moment of connection.” What did you learn?

翻译:

  • 你为什么做你现在做的事?
  • 你刚被邀请到白宫发表演说。请附上你的演说辞。
  • 所有学生在高中毕业前都应该知道哪件事?
  • 你的世界中有哪一点令你担忧?你希望做些什么来使它变得更美好?
  • 正面感情专家,我校教授芭芭拉·弗雷德里克森把爱定义成“人们(甚至是陌生人)之间的瞬时联系”。给我们讲讲你所体验过的“瞬时联系”。你从中学到了什么?

解析:

字数限制:五选一,400-500词

  • Pet Peeve:
  • Favorite saying:
  • Favorite time of day:
  • Autobiography subtitle:
  • First thought when I woke up this morning:

翻译:

  • 我最不能忍的事:
  • 座右铭:
  • 一天中最喜欢的时刻:
  • 自传的副标题:
  • 今早醒来的第一个想法:

字数限制:每题20词

2013-2014 [+]

  • Most of us have one or more personality quirks. Explain one of yours and what it says about you.
  • What do you hope to find over the rainbow?
  • If you could travel anywhere in time of space, either real or imaged, where would you go and why?
  • Tell us about a time when your curiosity led you someplace you weren’t expecting to go.

翻译:

  • 我们中的大多数都有一个或几个有个性之处。解释你的这样一点,它体现了你的什么?
  • 你希望在彩虹那边发现什么?
  • 如果你能去现实中或想象中的任何时间和地点,你会去哪?为什么?
  • 告诉我们当你的好奇心把你领到不曾意料到的地方的那一刻。

解析:

字数限制:五选一,400-500词

  • My theme song:
  • Best thing since sliced bread:
  • My most treasured possession:
  • Super power I’d most like to have:
  • Gadget that needs inventing:
  • Biggest little worry:

翻译:

  • 我的主题歌:
  • 切片面包以来最好的事:
  • 我最珍视的所有物:
  • 我最希望有的超能力:
  • 需要被发明的小工具(包括小型电子产品):
  • 最大的小心事:

字数限制:每题20词

申请问答

问:国际学生有资格获得财政资助吗?
答:只有美国永久居民和美国公民有资格获得助学金。国际学生可以申请奖学金。

问:北卡教堂山提供什么样的奖金?这些奖金适用的学生群体是哪些?
答:我们为学生提供奖学金和助学金。

奖学金根据学生的学业表现发放,比如学习成绩和参加的活动。申请助学金不会影响奖学金的发放。

助学金根据学生的资金需求发放。有些助学金会有学业或者其他方面的要求,有些不会。申请助学金的学生同样享有申请奖学金的资格。

也有一些奖金需要学生满足捐赠者的特殊要求,比如国籍或者高中出勤情况等。根据捐赠者的要求,这些奖金有可能是奖学金,也有可能是助学金。

国际学生享有奖学金申请资格,没有助学金申请资格。

问:怎样才能获得奖学金?
答:奖学金没有额外的申请程序,申请入学的学生会被自动划入到奖学金的考虑范畴中。只有申请Pogue奖学金的学生会被要求提供更多信息。在授予奖学金时,我们会考察学生的各个方面,包括成绩的连贯性、高中课程的强度、标准化考试成绩、领导力、对知识的好奇心以及文书写作。我们会整体考察学生的申请,并不会只关注学生的学业表现,比如班级排名或者考试成绩。

问:我在新生阶段没有获得奖学金,在之后还有可能获得吗?
答:奖学金通常只授予新生。这些奖学金不常有,所以竞争非常激烈,并且在授予新生之后就不再有多余的资金。在新生阶段没有获得奖学金的学生可以寻求校外资助,或者查看Office of Distinguished ScholarshipHonors Carolina寻求可能的奖学金奖励。

问:我什么时候会收到奖学金授予通知?
答:我们有两个申请截止日期。一个是EA申请截止日期,另一个是最终申请截止日期。如果你申请了EA,你会在1月初收到通知;如果你在最终申请截止日期阶段提交申请,你会在3月初收到通知。

*以上问答内容由AADPS根据第一手资料编译,并不代表AADPS自身观点。

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