如何写好专业文书(附招生官例文)

为什么留学文书如此难写?部分原因是很难知道什么文书能在申请中发挥作用,什么会是无用功。为了让你更好地了解大学在寻找什么,我们认为我们应该自己写一篇。

当然,每个人都有各自的故事,不同的大学也有不同的文书题目。在我们留学文书例文中,我们的假想学生正在申请伊利诺伊大学香槟分校假想的“听音乐专业”。我校的文书题目见此


I was going to be sick if I didn’t calm down. My head was screaming, but my feet steered me closer to the room. Three doors away. I was about to fail my first-ever chemistry test. Those notes Eddie gave me—he didn’t call it a cheat sheet, but that’s what it was—were at the bottom of my backpack. Two doors away. I knew junior grades were important for college applications. One door away. If the notes were in my pocket, I could access them during the exam.

My classroom was in front of me, but I pulled off to the side and fished through my bag until I found what I needed: my headphones. With Cat Stevens’s “Sitting,” my world was cool again.

For six years, I’ve lowered my stress by listening to music. Taunts from middle-school bullies were swept away by Aretha Franklin and Arcade Fire. Mika was my bout of acne, Cake my driver’s ed test, and A Tribe Called Quest my parents’ divorce.

My high school didn’t offer any Listening to Music classes, so I formed a club sophomore year, Hear Their Everywhere. Serving as its president since that time, I have grown the group to 50 members and counting. With my teacher’s permission, I also put on playlists during art class. It’s a small way of incorporating music into the classroom, but it makes a big difference.

Though music seems to exist in another dimension, it clarifies my real world. It encourages me when I feel like surrendering. It articulates my pain when I don’t know myself. And it inspires me to do the right thing when I’m tempted not to.

With Cat’s calming influence in my ears, I was on my way that day and could make it through the test. I walked into the classroom with confidence—not in my chemistry abilities, but in my integrity. When I ended up passing with a low C, nothing could have made me prouder.

I’m still on my way now, hoping to become a Music Listener after college. One of my life-long ambitions is to not only listen to music full time, but also impart this passion to others. An engaging and rigorous educational program could broaden my horizons and further these goals. I’m confident that Listening to Music at UIUC is that program, and I’d love the chance to become part of it.


留学文书很重要,但请记住它们只是申请审查的一部分。当大学阅读你的申请时,我们知道你并不局限于字数范围。

如果你仍然不确定如何开始起草你的最佳作品,我们还提供针对UIUC文书的提示和指导。祝好运,写作愉快!

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