普渡大学(Purdue University)录取文书

2014年

Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences.
翻译:请简述你的一项课外活动或工作经历。
解析:AADPS分类I-b
字数限制:可选,250词

I joined the Model United Nations Club in Grade 10. Together with senior club members, we learned more about the historic and contemporary diplomatic relationships between nations as well as major campaigns of the East and West.

One year later, I led recruits to participate in regional and municipal MUN conferences, where I shared my experience with them and provided assistance with speech writing and practice.

Overall, my time in the MUN Club not only let me meet new people and make friends, but also trained me to be an effective communicator and critical thinker.

留学文书译文(机翻):

我在十年级加入了模范联合国俱乐部。我们与俱乐部资深成员一起,了解了更多关于国家间历史和当代外交关系以及东西方重大战役的信息。

一年后,我带领新兵参加了地区和市政MUN会议,在那里我与他们分享了我的经验,并在演讲写作和练习方面提供了帮助。

总的来说,我在MUN俱乐部的时间不仅让我结识了新朋友,还培养了我成为一名有效的沟通者和批判性思考者。

How will opportunities at Purdue support your interests, both in and out of the classroom?
翻译:普渡大学课堂内外的机会会如何支持你的兴趣?
解析:AADPS分类I-c
字数限制:100词

An institution famed for academic rigor, Purdue attracts me with its unmatched engineering programs. It will offer me comprehensive training and plentiful opportunities that will be indispensable for my lifelong career as an engineer. The fine tutoring service will facilitate my transition to a new academic environment, and eventually, I can apply to be a tutor myself and serve the community in return.

As a side note, the "Galleries at Purdue" will satiate my thirst for fine arts. My designer side could not wait to be stimulated and inspired.

留学文书译文(机翻):

普渡大学以严谨的学术著称,它以无与伦比的工程项目吸引了我。它将为我提供全面的培训和丰富的机会,这对我作为一名工程师的终身职业生涯是必不可少的。良好的辅导服务将有助于我过渡到一个新的学术环境,最终,我可以申请成为一名导师,并为社会服务。

顺便说一句,“普渡美术馆”将满足我对美术的渴望。我的设计师一方迫不及待地想受到刺激和启发。

Briefly discuss your reasons for pursuing the major you have selected.
翻译:请简要阐述你想要攻读所选专业的理由。
解析:AADPS分类I-c
字数限制:100词

I choose undecided within engineering at Purdue because I want to first broadly explore the career outlook in three distinct sectors: Mechanical Engineering, Environmental Engineering, and Civil Engineering. ME allows me to study the fancy linkages, the artistic depiction of which appeared in the recent Transformers series. As an environmental engineer, I should be able to make the earth a better place. And in the classroom of CE, I can turn my childhood fantasy of designing airstrips into a reality. I hope that I can weigh these options in the first two years at Purdue before I make my decision.

留学文书译文(机翻):

我选择普渡大学工程系的“未决定”,因为我想首先广泛探讨三个不同领域的职业前景:机械工程、环境工程和土木工程。我允许我研究奇特的联系,其艺术描述出现在最近的变形金刚系列中。作为一名环境工程师,我应该能够让地球变得更美好。在CE的课堂上,我可以把童年设计简易机场的幻想变成现实。我希望在我做出决定之前,我能在普渡大学的头两年权衡这些选择。

标化条件:GPA 3.4 TOEFL 103 ACT 30

AADPS老师文书点评:对于同学校一系列的短文,需要考虑好素材的分配和详略安排,尽量做到每篇文书都能独立说清一件事,且综合来看也能一并支撑起较全面的个人形象。

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