2010年

Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences.
翻译：请简要说明你的一个课外活动或工作经历。
解析：AADPS分类I-b
字数限制：150词

Falling in love with the Party Rock Anthem by LMFAO, I decided to learn Melbourne Shuffle, the dance shown in the music video. Initially, I had some difficulties learning the steps until I saw the music video again, which depicts everyone dancing non-stop under the spell of rhythmic beats.

I suddenly realized dancing should be something innate and fun. I no longer pushed myself but danced to the tune I hummed whenever I was alone. Then I showed and taught the dance to my classmates, and we decided to pull off a stunning performance for the upcoming talent show. After practicing for five days, some students were still worried. So I told them that it was all about relaxing and having fun and that even if the next move was forgotten, they could just let their bodies take over.

It turned out to be the most memorable night ever.

留学文书译文（机翻）：

爱上了LMFAO的派对摇滚歌曲，我决定学习音乐视频中显示的墨尔本Shuffle舞蹈。起初，我在学习这些步骤时遇到了一些困难，直到我再次看到音乐视频，视频中描述了每个人在节奏节拍的魔咒下不停地跳舞。

我突然意识到跳舞应该是天生的和有趣的。我不再强迫自己，而是随着我独自一人时哼的曲子跳舞。然后我向我的同学展示并教他们跳舞，我们决定为即将到来的才艺秀表演一场精彩绝伦的表演。经过五天的练习，一些学生仍然很担心。所以我告诉他们，这一切都是为了放松和娱乐，即使下一步被忘记了，他们也可以让自己的身体接管。

这是有史以来最难忘的一晚。

标化条件：GPA 3.5 TOEFL 98 老SAT 1980

AADPS老师文书点评：课外活动题在选择材料时，要着重考虑是否能让自己在招生官眼中脱颖而出，独特的技能、卓越的领导力和开创性的举措都是可行的选项。看看能否让招生官确信自己能利用这些优势继续为大学社区做出应有的贡献。

家长感言：AADPS老师本身毕业于美国名校，对美国高等教育有独特的认知和思考，给孩子做的方案无论是充实程度还是可操作程度都无懈可击。