2015年
We would like to know more about your interest in NYU. What motivated you to apply to NYU? Why have you applied or expressed interest in a particular campus, school, college, program, and/or area of study? If you have applied to more than one, please also tell us why you are interested in these additional areas of study or campuses. We want to understand---Why NYU?
翻译：我们想要更多了解你对纽约大学的兴趣。是什么促使你申请纽约大学？为什么你选择申请某个特定校园，学院，项目和/或研究领域或对它们表达了兴趣？如果你申请了不止一个，请告诉我们你为什么对额外申请的专业或校区感兴趣。我们想知道——为什么选择纽约大学？
解析：AADPS分类I-c
字数限制：400词
In the summer vacation of 10th grade, I came to the United States for the first time and took the opportunity to visit NYU. To be honest, I had never seen a university quite like it---campus seamlessly blending into the city. CSI: New York gave me some rough ideas about New York, but walking on the 5th avenue, viewing the skyline from the observation deck of the Empire State Building, and appreciating the collections of the Metropolitan Museum of Art really changed me. When the bus finally arrived at the NYU campus, I found myself among jovial students of different colors and ages. The smile on their faces showed me the passion of this magical university, and I just realized that meeting interesting people is an important way of learning as well.
Having taken AP Computer Science in high school, I wish to keep exploring computer and technology-related fields as an undergraduate and may receive rigorous training in the prestigious Courant Institute of Mathematical Sciences. The solid mastery of advanced algorithms and tools, in addition to the problem-solving mindset, would be indispensable for my professional growth. Other than this, I have been a student of fine arts since the age of five. Having had a taste in Chinese painting, marker painting, sketch, and watercolor painting, I intend to continue my artistic pursuit with the resources and opportunities offered by the NYU Tisch School of the Arts. The Open Arts curriculum shall enable me to expand my creative horizons and collaborate with talented peers. Then the NYU Game Center will empower me to combine the tech and art sides, producing fascinating games taking advantage of new technologies like voice recognition, advanced AI, and virtual reality.
The possibilities of my future can only be rivaled by the perks provided by NYU and New York City. The diversity and dynamics of a modern metropolis always make me feel at home, so I look forward to my college years and the exciting career afterward.
留学文书译文（机翻）：
在十年级的暑假里，我第一次来到美国，并借此机会参观了纽约大学。老实说，我从来没有见过这样的大学——校园与城市无缝融合。CSI：纽约给了我一些关于纽约的粗略想法，但走在第五大道上，从帝国大厦的观景台上看天际线，欣赏大都会艺术博物馆的藏品确实让我改变了。当巴士终于到达纽约大学校园时，我发现自己置身于不同肤色和年龄的快乐学生之中。他们脸上的笑容向我展示了这所神奇大学的激情，我刚刚意识到，结识有趣的人也是一种重要的学习方式。
在高中学习了AP计算机科学之后，我希望在本科期间继续探索计算机和技术相关领域，并可能在著名的库兰特数学科学学院接受严格的培训。对高级算法和工具的扎实掌握，以及解决问题的思维方式，对于我的专业成长来说是不可或缺的。除此之外，我从五岁起就开始学习美术。我对中国画、记号画、素描和水彩画有过一定的兴趣，我打算利用纽约大学蒂什艺术学院提供的资源和机会继续我的艺术追求。开放艺术课程将使我能够拓展我的创作视野，并与有才华的同龄人合作。然后，纽约大学游戏中心将使我能够将技术和艺术结合起来，利用语音识别、高级人工智能和虚拟现实等新技术制作精彩的游戏。
我未来的可能性只能与纽约大学和纽约市提供的福利相媲美。现代大都市的多样性和活力总是让我感到宾至如归，所以我期待着我的大学生活和之后令人兴奋的职业生涯。
标化条件：GPA 3.7 TOEFL 103 ACT 32
AADPS老师文书点评：纽约大学的Why文书很多年一直没有变过。因为纽大风格自由、学生多、项目多、“以纽约为校园”，文书能否精准匹配学校的细节点并体现自身特色就变得尤为重要。
家长感言：纽大现在成了前三十的学校，对大陆的孩子门槛可以说是越来越水涨船高了。感激老师当初的精准定位和耐心细致的文书面试辅导，让孩子的大学生涯能高开高走。