2011年
Why are you interested in The Ohio State University?
翻译：你为何对就读俄亥俄州立大学感兴趣？
解析：AADPS分类I-c
University is the training ground for young adults where they acquire knowledge and build characters. The learning activity of the college students is an interaction between individual efforts and collective interplay, for the purpose of forming a union of studying, thinking, and application. Only through a leading research university with unmatched material and personnel resources covering the majority of arts and sciences subjects can a young man get well-rounded preparation for the emerging challenges in his future career, as the current trend of knowledge explosion calls for interdisciplinary amalgamation. Therefore, I put the generic ranking of the university as the primary factor of college transferring and would prefer one which boasts an all-embracing scope.
OSU is one of the largest comprehensive universities in the States. With more than ten schools, it ranks well ahead of its peers. It has a history of cultivating leaders in academia who achieved significant accomplishments in cutting-edge research areas, such as Paul Flory, the winner of 74’ Noble Prize in Chemistry and William A. Fowler, the winner of 83’ Noble Prize in Physics. The Engineering School to which I am currently applying is renowned for extraordinary educational and research capabilities.
It is also worth mentioning that OSU is located in Columbus, the capital of Ohio State and one of the most active and energetic hubs in the Northeast US. Thanks to the close ties between OSU and other local universities, government, and organizations, a close-knit community culture has been built up. This fact greatly appeals to me, since as a foreign student, I would enjoy this cultural exchange experience as much as I can by fully succumbing to the lively pulse of the urban growth.
Beyond the academics, I have been long noticing the importance of co-curriculum activities. Therefore, I have developed an assortment of hobbies during the past years, including taekwondo, soccer, basketball, football, saxophone, and traditional Chinese calligraphy. As an avid soccer fan, I have been the VIP player of my current university. The fact that OSU has won BCS national championship five times in a row has inspired and motivated me, making up my mind on applying for your esteemed institute!
留学文书译文（机翻）：
大学是年轻人学习知识和塑造性格的训练场。大学生的学习活动是个人努力和集体互动的互动，目的是形成学习、思考和应用的统一体。由于当前知识爆炸的趋势要求跨学科融合，只有通过一所拥有无与伦比的物质和人力资源的一流研究型大学，覆盖大部分文理学科，年轻人才能为未来职业中出现的挑战做好全面的准备。因此，我将大学的一般排名作为大学转学的首要因素，并倾向于选择一个范围广泛的排名。
OSU是美国最大的综合性大学之一。它拥有十多所学校，远远领先于同行。它有培养在前沿研究领域取得重大成就的学术界领袖的历史，如74年诺贝尔化学奖获得者保罗·弗洛里和83年诺贝尔物理学奖获得者威廉·福勒。我目前申请的这所工程学校以非凡的教育和研究能力而闻名。
还值得一提的是，俄勒冈州州立大学位于俄亥俄州首府哥伦布，是美国东北部最活跃、最有活力的中心之一。由于OSU与其他当地大学、政府和组织之间的密切联系，建立了紧密的社区文化。这一事实对我很有吸引力，因为作为一名外国学生，我会尽可能地享受这种文化交流经验，完全屈服于城市发展的活力脉搏。
除了学术界，我早就注意到了合作课程活动的重要性。因此，在过去的几年里，我发展了各种各样的爱好，包括跆拳道、足球、篮球、足球、萨克斯管和中国传统书法。作为一名狂热的足球迷，我一直是我所在大学的VIP球员。OSU已经连续五次获得BCS全国冠军，这一事实激励和激励了我，我决定申请贵校！
标化条件：GPA 3.5 TOEFL 102 免标化
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