2012年
Leadership is a constant theme and emphasis at CMC. One way CMC emphasizes leadership is through the Athenaeum Speaker Series, which enables CMC students to dine with leaders from a wide range of fields every weeknight during the academic year. Recent speakers have included authors, activists, entrepreneurs, scientists, professors, politicians, and more. If you could invite anyone to speak at the Athenaeum, who would you choose and why?
翻译：领导力是长久以来我校的主题和重点。我校强调领导力的一种方式是通过图书馆系列演说。在这一活动里，学年中的每一个工作日晚上克莱蒙特的学生都能与各个领域的领袖共进晚餐。近期的演说者包括作家、活动家、企业家、科学家、教授、政治家等等。如果你可以邀请任何人来图书馆做这个演讲，你会请谁？为什么？
解析：AADPS分类III-e
字数限制：300词
I would like to choose Kang Tung Pih to be the speaker at the Athenaeum. She was my compatriot and famous female rights activist. Over 102 years ago, she has received fine liberal arts education in the States and exercised the vision of the gender equality --- "women shall have the same intellectual development and rights as their male counterparts" --- with her whole life after her returning to China.
Tung Pih could talk about how females could be empowered to tackle emerging challenges in the 21st century and how female college students could topple the backward ideologies and oppressive hierarchies in their surroundings. She may expound how we must absorb the essences of oriental and occidental cultures in order to utilize superior willpower and wisdom to fight inequalities in life and society. Following her footsteps, we shall explore and create with our female delicacy and etch our names on the tablet of history. I trust that leaders like Tung Pih, with all resources that only Claremont McKenna can offer, shall tap our hidden potential and turn us into agents of change for the betterment of the world.
留学文书译文（机翻）：
我想选择康东璧作为雅典娜的演讲者。她是我的同胞，也是著名的女权活动家。102多年前，她在美国接受了良好的文科教育，并在回国后的一生中践行了两性平等的愿景——“女性应享有与男性同等的智力发展和权利”。
东平可以谈论如何赋予女性权力，以应对21世纪新出现的挑战，以及女大学生如何推翻周围落后的意识形态和压迫性的等级制度。她可能会解释我们必须如何吸收东西方文化的精华，以便利用超强的意志力和智慧来消除生活和社会中的不平等。跟随她的脚步，我们将以女性的细腻探索和创造，并将我们的名字铭刻在历史的碑上。我相信，像东平这样的领导人，凭借克莱蒙特·麦肯纳所能提供的一切资源，将挖掘我们隐藏的潜力，并将我们转变为促进世界改善的变革力量。
标化条件：GPA 3.9 免TOEFL 老SAT 2280
AADPS老师文书点评：对于这种虚拟情景的留学文书题目，中国申请者会遇到一个两难困境：烂大街的西方名人讲不出独到的东西，耳熟能详的中国名人招生官可能从没听过。这里我们采用了一个折中的手法，供大家参考。
家长感言：在遇到AADPS以前，本想以孩子的水平只好进入本州的州立大学。所幸她在申请季标化顺利出分，AADPS顾问也立马提供了最适合她的申请方案和策略，结果真是令人喜出望外！