2014年

Please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission.
翻译：请告诉我们为什么我校对你很适合，以及是什么具体的因素促使你申请的。
解析：AADPS分类I-c
字数限制：250词

I really look forward to joining the BU School of Management, and the story of Ms. Kovalski on your website hints at the exciting prospect of my college life. Just like her, I intend to inherit the family tradition and delve into business right away, taking advantage of the great opportunities the university and the city could offer.

My father and his colleagues founded and manage one of the greatest state-owned construction firms in China. Inspired by his entrepreneurship for a long time, I plan to start my own venture early at college, and a Chinese specialty shop that offers quality, hand-picked goods might be a fitting start. The BSBA program at BU could offer me unique leverages by showing me the world of business from day one, while in many other programs I might need to wait until junior year. In this way, I am able to immediately apply what I have learned in the classroom to real issues, and receive priceless hands-on experiences in the process. I also appreciate the technical emphasis of the program, where the strategic uses of social network marketing, CRM, and business intelligence are integrated parts of the courses. In addition, with over 60 colleges and universities, Boston boasts an unparalleled academic community, which will simultaneously serve as the client base and talent pool of my start-up.

The vision of the School of Management, creating value for the world, echoes with mine. I will learn so much by the time of graduation.

留学文书译文（机翻）：

我真的很期待加入波士顿大学管理学院，你们网站上关于科瓦尔斯基女士的故事暗示了我大学生活令人兴奋的前景。和她一样，我打算继承家族传统，利用大学和这座城市能够提供的巨大机会，立即涉足商业。

我父亲和他的同事创立并管理着中国最伟大的国有建筑公司之一。受他长期创业精神的启发，我计划在大学早期开始自己的创业，一家提供优质手工挑选商品的中国特色商店可能是一个合适的开始。BU的BSBA课程可以从第一天开始向我展示商业世界，从而为我提供独特的优势，而在许多其他课程中，我可能需要等到大三。通过这种方式，我能够立即将课堂上学到的知识应用到实际问题中，并在这个过程中获得无价的实践经验。我也很欣赏该课程的技术重点，其中社交网络营销、CRM和商业智能的战略应用是课程的组成部分。此外，波士顿拥有60多所学院和大学，拥有无与伦比的学术社区，同时也将成为我创业公司的客户群和人才库。

管理学院为世界创造价值的愿景与我的愿景相呼应。到毕业的时候，我会学到很多东西。

标化条件：GPA 3.5 免TOEFL 老SAT 1960

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