2012年
How did you first learn about Lehigh University and what motivated you to apply?
翻译：你最初是如何知道利哈伊大学的？是什么促使你申请我校的？
解析：AADPS分类I-c
字数限制：100-150词
I wonder whether there was another Chinese student who told you that Lehigh has the same pronunciation as “awesome” in my country. As a matter of fact, it is really an awesome place for me.
Like a watchman on the mountain
Stands she grandly bold,
Earth's and Heaven's secret seeking,
Hoarding them like gold.
When I listened to this song Our Alma Mater on your website, the ancient mountain range, the evergreen forest, and Lehigh who keenly watches everything vividly appear before my mind’s eye. Historic buildings made of stone, libraries that are pieces of artwork themselves, and boundless fields and courts, all of these draw me to it. As someone who grows up in the concrete forest, I am fascinated by the opportunity to embrace nature and unleash my passion for sports on those lush, hilly grasslands. I even fancy joining the ranks of Mountain Hawks and personally bringing a victory to old Lehigh again.
留学文书译文（机翻）：
我想知道是否有另一个中国学生告诉你，在我的国家里，理海大学的发音和“厉害”一样。事实上，这对我来说真是一个很棒的地方。
就像山上的守望者
她勇敢地站着，
天地间的秘密探索，
像黄金一样囤积。
当我在你们的网站上听到这首歌《我们的母校》时，古老的山脉、常绿的森林，以及敏锐地注视着一切的列海都清晰地呈现在我的眼前。石头砌成的历史建筑，本身就是艺术品的图书馆，以及无边无际的田野和庭院，所有这些都吸引着我。作为一个在混凝土森林中长大的人，我对有机会拥抱大自然、在那些郁郁葱葱的丘陵草原上释放我对运动的热情非常着迷。我甚至想加入山鹰的行列，亲自把胜利再次带给老理海。
In your opinion, what are the five characteristics of a successful person?
翻译：在你看来，成功人士有哪五个特质？
解析：AADPS分类IV-c
字数限制：100-150词
Successful people will follow neither stereotypes nor the crowd. They understand the importance of the specific context and will actively adjust their behavior patterns to adapt to it.
Successful people feel proud and privileged to have followers who might even devote their own lives to them. Likewise, they will not hesitate to repay such feelings with all they have.
Successful people are punctual as clockwork. They take their own promises seriously and would always fulfill these even at grave costs.
Successful people are not usually limited by the mundane circumstances of life. They strive to attain happiness for themselves and their peers. As a result, they are constantly exhilarated by the triumphs of others.
Successful people know the essence of communication and exchange well. They have the empathy to take the needs and emotions of others into consideration. During negotiations, they often propose conditions that are hard to refuse.
留学文书译文（机翻）：
成功人士既不会遵循成见，也不会随大流。他们理解特定环境的重要性，并会积极调整自己的行为模式以适应它。
成功人士感到自豪和荣幸，因为他们有追随者，甚至可能为他们奉献自己的生命。同样，他们也会毫不犹豫地用他们所拥有的一切来回报这种感受。
成功的人非常守时。他们认真对待自己的承诺，即使付出巨大代价，也会始终履行这些承诺。
成功人士通常不受世俗生活环境的限制。他们努力为自己和同龄人获得幸福。因此，他们总是为他人的胜利而兴奋。
成功人士非常了解沟通和交流的本质。他们有同理心来考虑他人的需求和情绪。在谈判中，他们经常提出难以拒绝的条件。
标化条件：GPA 3.5 TOEFL 93 SAT 1790
AADPS老师文书点评：和学生性格以及体育上的成就相匹配，我们采用了直抒胸臆的手法来修订这篇why school，让读者直观感受到申请者对于入读学校的强烈热情。
家长感言：感谢AADPS，顾问们一丝不苟的态度和诚心、耐心、用心的服务让我们这个家庭获益良多，孩子经过这个申请季也有了不小的成长。