AADPS分类(成就类留学文书)

AADPS分类I-a:特立独行

  • Reflect on a time when you challenged a belief or idea. What prompted you to act? Would you make the same decision again?
  • Nelson Mandela believed that “What counts in life is not the mere fact that we have lived. It is what difference we have made to the lives of others that will determine the significance of the life we lead.” Describe a way in which you have made or hope to make a difference.

解析:这一类型的文书题目要求学生彰显自己与众不同一面。写作的时候可以从思想上和行动上两方面出发,一定要至少把其中之一写深写透。要尝试将读者带入自身所处的独特环境或挑战中,令其能认同自己的动机。不必刻意点出所体现的优秀品质(如好奇心(curiosity)、坚强(resilience)、耐心(patience)、正义感(justice)等等),但要围绕它们展开素材。

如何在留学文书里彰显与众不同

AADPS分类I-b:成就

  • Discuss an accomplishment or event, formal or informal, that marked your transition from childhood to adulthood within your culture, community, or family.
  • Tell us about a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it relate to the person you are?

解析:写作此类文书时,要注意把事件的背景讲清楚(请意识到由于文化和生活环境的差异,招生官可能并不能直接意识到一些事件的重要性)。重点往往在于用诸多细节水到渠成的映衬出成长的转折点或人生的终极目的。

如何在留学文书里写好自己的成就

AADPS分类I-c:学习计划(俗称why school或why major)

  • How does the University of Chicago, as you know it now, satisfy your desire for a particular kind of learning, community, and future? Please address with some specificity your own wishes and how they relate to UChicago.
  • “Magis,” a Latin word meaning “more,” is often cited in reference to goals of Jesuit education, which seeks to help students become better, do more, and have as much impact on society as possible. How do you hope to achieve the Magis in your life?

解析:这类留学文书相当普遍,是学生体现自己远大理想的绝佳机会。学生应该着力从自己的家庭背景、学习兴趣、职业目标和独特才能入手,勾勒一个完善可行、激动人心的学术愿景。从长远的方面来说,学生应该直陈自己的人生理想和愿景,将其与短期目标无缝的结合起来。此类题目的另一个主要目的是考察申请者是否是随意添加学校凑数,还是经过了一番深思熟虑认为非去该校就读不可。如能在文书中较好的体现自身对学校及项目的深刻了解以及较高的忠诚度,能为录取大大加分。

Why文书该怎么写?

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陈 欣

陈 欣

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